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The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.

The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.
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The table represents the
number
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 of
transport
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type
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types
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 in European countries from 1995 and 2025.
Firstly
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, there were a
number
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 of fluctuations in
transport
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 type in European countries
such
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 as, in 1995
bus
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the bus
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was
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were
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a
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the
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 most common
transport
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 in
Europea
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European
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 countries around 56,
however
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, the air and bicycle had
a
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the
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 same
number
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 at 2 in the same years.
Secondly
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, in 2005,
bicycle
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bicycles
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 reached
a
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the
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 lowest
number
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 of people about 1.
Finally
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, in 2015 the rail registered
a
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the
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 largest
number
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 of
transport
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which
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apply
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used at 60. In conclusion, the bus experienced
a
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an
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 upward
number
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 of use,
while
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the bicycle
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bicycle
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bicycles
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 showed a downward
number
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 from 1995 to 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, transport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Transportation preferences
  • Trends and shifts
  • Technological advancements
  • Urban policies
  • Substantial increase
  • Infrastructural developments
  • Projection
  • Environmental policies
  • Technological innovations
  • Electric vehicles
  • Smart public systems
  • Shared transportation
  • Transformation trends
  • Responsiveness
  • Transport policies
  • Sustainability aspects
  • Eco-friendly commute
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