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The maps illustrate an industrial area in norbiton in the presenet day compared with plans for future development of the site.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in norbiton in the presenet day compared with plans for future development of the site.
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These two given maps
dedicate
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the
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to the
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 changes in the industrial zone
on
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in
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 the future.
According to
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 the latter plan, there will be several changes that
includes
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include
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enlarged
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enlarging
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 the roads between houses.
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Furthermore
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Furthermore,
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 there will be
bridge
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a bridge
the bridge
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 on the
river
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.
more over
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moreover
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 a
playgound
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playground
,
school
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a school
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, shops and
medical
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a medical
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 centre will be opened up in
this
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 area.
In the
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The
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 current layout shows there is
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river
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a river
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 and farmland on the north of the industrial unit that will be constructed to
a
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housing and path to the south of the
river
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.
In addition
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 on the
south east
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southeast
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 of the
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river
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river,
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 there will
opened up
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be
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 a playground and houses
at the end
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 of the street,
while
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 on the east
of
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apply
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the main
square
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 will be removed and
school
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a school
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 will be set up. A new access will be constructed to the houses on the west of the main
square
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.
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on
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On
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 the other hand there will be a
square
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 on the main road just before the big
square
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 on the south of it.
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Finally
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in
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on
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 both sides of the larger
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square
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square,
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 there will be build shops and
medical
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a medical
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 centre
on
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in
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 the
south west
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southwest
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 and south east
respectivly
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respectively
.
there
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There
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 will be more construction
on
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in
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 the east of the industrial zone.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river, square with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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