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The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and pie graph show data on the human population in Australia,
according to
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 their nationality and living area.
Overall
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, the majority part of Australia's population is made up of Australians and many other nations.
People
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 from all over the world live in cities rather than in the countryside.
The
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73% of the country's populace are local citizens , but there are
also
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 British
people
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 and New Zealanders living there, with
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proportions of 7% and 3% respectively.
Moreover
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, 14% inhabitants of the whole country consist of
people
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 from other nationalities. Immigrants from China and Denmark have a relatively small percentage. The 99% per cent and 90% of the Chinese and New Zealand immigrants live in cities. With the highest percentage of
people
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 in urban areas, Australia has a lead of 20%. With the second result in the table, Denmark humans have proportions of 83% to 17%. Small percentages separate British and Dutch
people
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 in cities and rural areas.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • nationalities
  • urban areas
  • rural areas
  • population density
  • ethnic diversity
  • immigration
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • significance
  • multiculturalism
  • population growth
  • trend analysis
  • data representation
  • comparable statistics
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