The Two diagrams compare the layout of the university campus as it was 2010 years with a new designer at present.
It is clear that
the main change of 2010 involved the addition of a science building, art building and student facilities.
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Firstly
, there were a number of significant changes have Linking Words
take
Wrong verb form
took
n
place Correct determiner usage
apply
such
as a university office Linking Words
was
demolished and replaced by a science building, Replace the word
being
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however
shops and restaurants in the southeast of the university were destroyed and relocated to a new building in south Add a comma
however,
west
. Correct your spelling
southwest
Secondly
, a new accommodation appears behind the old students' accommodation in South West. Linking Words
Finally
, the lawn and seating area were knocked down.Linking Words
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