The map show the lay out of a university campus in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map show the lay out of a university campus in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map show the lay out of a university campus in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Two diagrams compare the layout of the university campus as it was 2010 years with a new designer at present.
It is clear that
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the main change of 2010 involved the addition of a science building, art building and student facilities.
Firstly
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, there were a number of significant changes have
take
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took
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n
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apply
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place
such
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as a university office
was
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being
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demolished and replaced by a science building,
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however
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however,
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shops and restaurants in the southeast of the university were destroyed and relocated to a new building in south
west
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southwest
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.
Secondly
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, a new accommodation appears behind the old students' accommodation in South West.
Finally
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, the lawn and seating area were knocked down.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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