Nowadays, more people travel abroad for tourism than ever before, Do you think this is a positive or negative development

There is no doubt that the world is witnessing a high

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to have a positive effect on nations and

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if the right regulations were made and I will be providing the reasonings that support my opinion. The increasing

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of people travelling thousands of miles to other

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is something we cannot argue about.

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social media and

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that trigger their curiosity to get to know different cultures and visit

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famous destinations like Rome which is a great example as it is one of the most well-known cities for

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. In 2023 alone, Rome has hosted over 30 million

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from the rest of the world. With a great

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of people visiting the

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could play a vital role in dramatically

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flourishing

and boosting the economy of the country which, in return, will certainly have a positive impact on the residents and their living. The only downside of

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of tourists visiting every year is that the city could get

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roads and streets. In high seasons, the

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destination could take more than an hour. But

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, limiting the

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of tourists won't be an effective solution as it would lead to a decrease in the country's income.

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, the

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collaboration and investment in money and effort to improve the infrastructure and road

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matter.

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a great way to interact with people from all walks of life. Many individuals formed worth-remembering friendships and connections through

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that the increasing

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of

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is bringing the world closer than ever to an

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that gives a sense of unity like we are

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one nation, leading to breaking cliches and stereotypes, reducing and minimizing racism and accepting differences as it provides the opportunity to get to know more about different cultures and the history of other

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trying mouth-watering cuisines that their

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may not provide. In conclusion, I believe that the positivities of increasing

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movement

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the negative ones, especially if governments and organizations dedicate their efforts to control the cogestions resulting.