The 2 graphs display broad information about places where dance
classes
are held and variations of these sessions based on age groups in Australia.
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the
most dance Correct article usage
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classes
were celebrated in private studios. Use synonyms
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students
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classes
.
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According to
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percentage
of school halls is small double times than indication of private studios. Correct article usage
the percentage
Furthermore
, the college-based studios and community halls cover together 28% of Linking Words
the
all locations.
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, there are just 2 Linking Words
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of Change to a plural noun
groups
students
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which their
amount passed 500;including:Correct pronoun usage
whose
11
-16 Correct determiner usage
those 11
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of the modern Use synonyms
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under
11 Correct determiner usage
those under
ages
of the ballet sessions. The number of Use synonyms
students
among 11-16 Use synonyms
ages
in ballet and under 11 Use synonyms
ages
in modern Use synonyms
classes
are equal each other approximately by 300. Use synonyms
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classes
, under 11 Use synonyms
ages
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students
and 11-16 Use synonyms
ages
group almost near are 450 and 420,respectively.Use synonyms
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