The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the number of monthly active users of some social network and messaging services between 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the percentage of social network users optimizing different platforms in 2014 and 2015.
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, the majority of netizens used only
one
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social network service in both years and the rate of individuals who used more than
one
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site to socialize increased in the later year. Starting with
rate
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the rate
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of
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an individual
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individual
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individuals
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on two
sites
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or less, in 2014 and 2015 those who were not on any social platforms were 22% and 21%
repectively
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respectively
. 36% of the netizen community had optimized only
one
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site and 23% used two
sites
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for socializing.
In contrast
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, in 2015,
these
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proportion had decreased
such
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that 28% of netizens networked with just
one
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platform and 24% of online individuals used two
sites
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for messaging
sevicies
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services
. Turning to
proportion
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the proportion
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of people who used three or more
sites
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to socialize, the rate of people in these categories
are
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smaller. In 2014, 12% of social network users were on three accounts but by 2015 they had increased to 16%.
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, 7% of netizens had accounts on four
and
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or
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more platforms in 2014 but by 2015 it had risen to 12%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words one, sites with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • monthly active users
  • social network services
  • messaging services
  • time frame
  • observe a trend
  • fluctuation
  • noticeable increase
  • significant decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • exponential growth
  • relative decline
  • steady rise
  • dramatic fall
  • comparative analysis
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