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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter •describe the problem; •explain how it affects you; •say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I want to describe a problem that I have been facing
since
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for
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last
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the last
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some
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few
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 days,I have a problem
to
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your
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cafe
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 chair,
you
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which you
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 put in front of my
home
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.
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,my
home
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 is near the market and recently
open
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 a
cafe
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 that name is khayam.
This
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 place is so
specious
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special
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 but they
also
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 put chairs for customers
along
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near
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 my
home
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 and I do park my car here so I can not because of the people.
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Cafe
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The cafe
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 opens at late night and I have hectic duties when I come
home
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 and try to take
rest
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a rest
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then
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 I can not.People who come for entertainment,
they
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 are talking which is so disturbing for me. I
request
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 the
cafe
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 manager
you did
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not put chairs here but still he did not take any action if he
Will
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Does
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 not resolve
this
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 matter
i
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 will take action against him.I will
do
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complain against him. I hope you will consider my request.
Your
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 faithfully, Rabia.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to structure your paragraphs clearly, with one main idea per paragraph.
task achievement
Include a proper salutation and ensure the tone is polite throughout the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Rephrase sentences for better clarity and grammatical accuracy.
task achievement
You clearly identified the problem with the cafe's chairs and how it affects you.
coherence and cohesion
Your intention to resolve the issue was articulated in the letter.
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