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The table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone between 2006 and 2010. Umar

The table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone between 2006 and 2010. Umar
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The table illustrates information about the
persons
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people
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 who use mobile phones with different features on their
phone
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phones
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 from 2006 to 2010.
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,the percentage of smartphone owners almost all of them increased,over the given period.The higher level on the table was a Make call for all given time. Make calls which
having
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have
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 100% ,during 4 years stay unchanged.
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,the figure of ratio
fall
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fell
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 to 1% in 2010 and it was 99%.Individuals who take photos went up,year by year and eventually in 2010
had
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apply
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76 proportion of residents
who take
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took
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photo
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photos
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.The portion of mobile users who send
also
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 receive text messages
grow
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grew
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up on
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by
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 6% between 2006 to 2010. The category which played games
double
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doubled
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 rose in two years after declined to 1% and
stay
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stayed
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in
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at
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their
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apply
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41%.Perhaps,the fastest growing category was Searching the internet,
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initially
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which initially
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wasn’t
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didn’t
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had
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have
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a
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apply
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data.
Nevertheless
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 skyrocketed and in 2010 got exactly 73%.Play music showed 26% became the lowest number between especially of
Cell
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a Cell
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 phone.Recording video
started
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started to
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 move upward
since
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in
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 2008 and for two years had 35% usage.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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