The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The graph illustrates information about three spreads usage between 1981 and 2007.
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, what stands out from the graph is that there were upward trends in the low fat & reduced spreads,
while
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the consumption of butter saw a considerable fall over the
last
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decade in the question. We can see that butter utilization rose steadily from 145
grams
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in 1981 to a peak of roughly 160
grams
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in 1986. Output
then
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fell rapidly, declining to the second usage of 45
grams
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in 2007.
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, looking at margarine, we see that
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consumption is largely reversed: 90
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was utilized in 1981, followed by a marked decline to 80
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in 1986, and
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fluctuated from 1991 to 1996, before dipping to just below 40
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year end. Regarding low fat & reduced spreads,
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appears to reflect usage, with a low of 10
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in 1996, which is the first 15 years wasn’t used, increasing consistently to 85
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in 2001, before finishing at 73
grams
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in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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