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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Some scientists predict that future generations will speak only
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 some say that it will ease communication between nations, others believe that could badly affect cultural diversity. On the
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 hand, it is beneficial for humanity because communication would be more efficient . People may have more opportunities to study abroad and save time and resources for learning only
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language
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,
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 barriers, that cause misunderstandings will decrease, as much as global conflicts.
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, the emergence of a universal
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 may cause the loss of cultural diversity.
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 is deeply connected with history and traditions. If smaller languages disappear, cultural knowledge and literature will lost forever.
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, linguistic diversity encourages creativity and ways of thinking which are essential for cultural development. Another disadvantage is that the domination of
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language
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 leads to the dominance of
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 particular group.

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Elaborate more on your main points with specific examples or evidence.
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Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next to enhance the flow of ideas.
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Consider adding a concluding statement that summarizes your viewpoint succinctly.
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The essay presents a clear point of view with distinct paragraphs addressing both sides of the argument.
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Good use of cohesive devices such as 'on the one hand' and 'on the other hand' to structure your argument.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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