The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 .

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 .
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The bar graph compares the proportion of families which live in owned and rented living quarters in two regions , England and Wales during nine
years
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between 1918 and 2011 .
Overall
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, It can seen that the percentage of people who live in rented
accommodation
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was an upward trend in the first five
years
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,
while
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in the
last
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four
years
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, families were living in rented
accommodation
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.
To begin
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with , the highest figure for human who have rented housing , with just under 80 % , compared to around just over 20 % for owned housing in 1918.
Moreover
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, over the period from 1939 to 1953 , the percentage at around just below 70 % for those who have rented
accommodation
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. Meanwhile , the figure witnessed
sine
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since
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in both
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accommodation
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about 50 % .
On the other hand
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, the second highest rank rate was for households in owned housing , with just below 70 % , compared to around just over 30 % in both two
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, 1991 and 2001. And
then
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it follows 2011 at 65 % approximately .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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