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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graph indicates the proportion of people who live in
cities
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 in four Asian countries between 1970 and 2020,
also
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 it provides a forecast of
population
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 from 2020 to 2040.
According to
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 what is shown, Malaysia experienced
the
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 major growth in
population
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 until 2020, and the prediction indicates that the
population
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 in
cities
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 will keep
soar
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 by 2040. Another key
information
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 in the graph is the growth of Indonesia, in 1970, Indonesia was the least populated country among others,
nonetheless
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, in 2020, the country placed second in terms of the
amount
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 of people who live in
cities
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. Thailand had the second least crowded
cities
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 by only approximately 18% of individuals decided to live in
cities
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.
Thereafter
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, in 2010, Thailand fell off to the
last
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 place
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 the skyrocketing of Indonesia,
whereas
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 Thailand plateaued its
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population
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around
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 30% from 1990 to 2020, Indonasia gradually surged its
population
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 at the same time period. Malaysian
cities
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 were home to 30% of the
population
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, in 2020, the percentage
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 to around 75%. Meanwhile, some fluctuations happened in the
population
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 of Philippino
cities
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. In 2020, the proportion was only 10% above
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the initial records,
cities
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 reached 40% of
total
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the total
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population
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. As the predictions indicate, the ranking of countries will remain steady,
furthermore
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, each country will grow
around
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 10% in the following two decades.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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