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The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.
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The table gives information about the
number
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 of temporary migrant
workers
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 in four countries, namely Australia, New
Zealand
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, the United Kingdom, and the United
States
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 in 2003 and 2006
as well as
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 the
number
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 of these
workers
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 per 1000
people
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 in these nations.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend and the United
States
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 was the country that had the highest
number
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 of
laborers
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 in the given period.
However
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, employers in New
Zealand
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 composed the highest
number
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 per 1000
people
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 in 2006. As can be seen from the given table, in 2003, the temporary migrant
workers
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 in the United
States
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 accounted for 577000
people
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 before increasing to 678000 in 2006, which led to the priority. Australia and the United Kingdom witnessed growth, with the former rising from 152000 to 219000 and the latter from 137000 to 266000. New
Zealand
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,
on the other hand
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, commenced at 65000
workers
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 in 2003, going up to 87000 in 2006. In terms of the
number
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 of temporary migrant
workers
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 per 1000
people
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 in 2006, New
Zealand
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 ranked
first,
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at 21.1, followed by Australia and the United Kingdom at 10.7 and 4.4, respectively.
In contrast
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, the United
States
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 experienced the lowest position, which stood at 2.3.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 87%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, workers, zealand, states, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Temporary migrant workers
  • Labor mobility
  • Statistical data
  • Insights
  • Trends
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Economic growth
  • Demand for labor
  • Immigration policies
  • Disparities
  • Concentration
  • Comparative analysis
  • Consequences
  • Economic impact
  • Cultural integration
  • Social services
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