Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your best friend who is a musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.

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Dear Sandy, I hope you're doing well. I'd like to invite you to my sister's wedding on Friday, 27th September.

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, my sister is a huge admirer of your guitar playing. So, I am insisting you

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play some songs

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the wedding. Even though my parents are not

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interested in musical events

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wedding

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, they agreed after suggesting your name.

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, they're a big

fan

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your

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music

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which you played

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summer. So, I want you to play some melodies and make

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event a memorable one. I know you won't agree

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any cash compensation for your work but I booked tickets for

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trip after the marriage.

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, I will take care of all the vacation expenses. I love to hear from you soon. Don't forget to pack your clothes for 1 week of

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. With love, Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Fri Feb 21 2025

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Consider introducing a more formal tone, especially since it's a wedding invitation.

coherence cohesion

Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea more clearly to enhance clarity.

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The invitation clearly states the date of the wedding and makes a personal connection to the musician.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is suitable for addressing a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

143 words

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