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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

Your city council is planning to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As a citizen, you do not want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council. In your letter, say what the importance of this historic building is mention why it should be renovated rather than pull down suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in the future You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter
rgards
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regarding
 the famous historic building of our town, Smalsar.I heard that you want to
diminsh
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diminish
this
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 building as there is
issue
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the issue
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 of allocating
funds
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 to renovate it.
Firstly
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 ,
i
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I
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 want to mention why
this
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 establishment is important as it
is
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was
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 made
up
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apply
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in
19th
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the 19th
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 century owing to which it has
incredible
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an incredible
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 look.Undoubtedly,
this
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 monument has
unique
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a unique
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 structure and cultural items
in
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apply
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it
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 attract tourists so much.
According to
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 me , it should be renovated as it can enhance our town's look and most
of
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apply
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tourists can visit
this
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 place by which it can opt to
accumulating
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accumulate
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funds
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.
Moreover
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,we can increase lt bit of visiting
ticket
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tickets
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 as well which
helps
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will help
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 to raise
funds
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 ,plus,
i
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I
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 will personally help you for raising as
i
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I
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 am
social
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a social
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 worker
of
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in
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 my town and
i
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I
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 can allocate donations from people to save
this
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 building. I hope you like my idea not to
dimish
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diminish
 and
allocating
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allocate
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funds
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 for
this
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famos
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famous
 article.I look forward
for
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to
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 your reply. yours faithfully
jyoti
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Jyoti
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 sharma

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grammar
Ensure to check for spelling errors, e.g., 'rgards' should be 'regards' and 'diminsh' should be 'diminish'.
content
Try to expand your ideas more fully. For example, elaborate on how raising ticket prices could contribute to funds.
grammar
Make sure to always capitalize the first letter of sentences and proper nouns, such as 'I' and 'Smalsar'.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses the importance of the historic building and suggests a fundraising plan, which highlights a good understanding of the task.
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