You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are goint to do about it.

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Dear management I am writing

this

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letter regarding my

bag

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which I

losted

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lost

last

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week when I was returning from Vancouver to Edmonton . My name is Sandeep Singh Brar , on

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last

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apply

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Saturday 15th of February traveled

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Air Canada. When I reached at Airport, I

recieved

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received

call

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a call

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from my home that my child

not

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was not

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well

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due

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and due

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to that I was thinking about my child and In

hurry

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a hurry

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apply

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forget

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forgot

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to pick

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up my

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bag

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from

baggage

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the baggage

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area.

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, I thought

airline

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the airline

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will

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would

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drop my

bag

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at my residence but

unfortunately

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unfortunately,

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they did not . My

bag

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colour is dark brown and in leather stuff .

Their

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key

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a key

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chain

also

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hanging on that with my first name of

alphabet

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the alphabet

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of S. I have my wallet in the

bag

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and

their

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there

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are important

envelope

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envelopes

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in it.

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, Cash, credit cards and my driving license in that. Which is really essential for surviving in

daiy

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daily

life. I did report to

airline

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the airline

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but they did not

gave

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give

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any valid answer

as well as

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staff behavior was not professional which

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was

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really

dissatisfied

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dissatisfying

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for me. Kindly please escalate my request on

priority

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a priority

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base

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basis

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and find out my suitcase as soon as you get that please deliver

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it to

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my house or I will

recieve

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receive

from

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it from

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lost

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the lost

a lost

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counter in

airport

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the airport

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both will

works

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work

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for me.

Last

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but not least please coach to the staff do their work

proper

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properly

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with

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a precisely

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precisely

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manner to

everyone

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every

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customers

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customer

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. Regards Sandeep

kaur123kaamlpreetSat Feb 22 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Check for spelling and grammar mistakes (e.g., 'losted' should be 'lost'). Pay attention to the use of articles (e.g., 'the bag' instead of 'my bag').

task achievement

You clearly explained the situation and described your suitcase well.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

242 words

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