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The graph below shows information about the total oil consumption of four major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the total oil consumption of four major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the total
oil
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usage
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 of four of the largest consumers between 2009 and 2030.
Overall
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, it is predicted that the United States
along with
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 countries in Western Europe and Japan will decrease their total
oil
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 consumption by 2030.
On the contrary
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, China and countries in the Middle East are expected to increase their demand for
oil
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.
Nevertheless
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, the United States will still remain the largest consumer of the four. Their total
oil
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usage
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 was calculated at approximately 10
million
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 barrels per day in 2015 and it is expected to drop to approximately 4
million
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, fifteen years later. Western Europe and Japan will continue their linear decrease starting at 4
million
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 barriers in 2009 and falling at approximately 2
million
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 in 2030. China and the Middle East are expected to follow the opposite trend. To be more accurate, their total
usage
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 will keep rising, reaching almost 4 and 3
million
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 barriers per day in 2025, respectively. In the next five years, the total
oil
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usage
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 is expected to drop minimally in China,
while
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 in the Middle East, the consumption will overcome 4
million
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 barriers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, usage, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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