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The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Children's books Adult fiction Educational books The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 Million dollars

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Children's books Adult fiction Educational books The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 Million dollars
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The line graph illustrates how many
children
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's
books
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, adult fiction and educational
books
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 were bought in a single country, from the year 2002 until 2006. Unite is measured by Dollar.
Overall
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, it is clear from the chart that the
sales
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 of
children
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's
books
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 and educational
books
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 underwent an upward trend,
while
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 adult fiction witnessed a gradual decrease.
Children
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's
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books
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sales
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 started in 2002 at nearly 33
million
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dollars
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 and saw a huge jump to about 50
million
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dollars
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 in 2005.
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, from 2005 to 2006 there was another dramatic growth in
sales
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 of
children
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's
books
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 hitting approximately 55
million
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dollars
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 representing its peak.
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, educational
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books
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sales
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' began at nearly 25
million
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dollars
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 and in spite of some fluctuation, they reached their peaks twice in 2003 and 2006 with more than 30
million
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dollars
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.
In contrast
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, Adult fiction was the only figure that experienced a downward trend, it started with the highest figure of over 40
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dollars
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,
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 and saw a modest fall to reach less than 40
million
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 in 2003.
Although
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 there was a slight rise in its
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, it went down again to reach its trough at exactly 30
million
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dollars
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 by the end of the period.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, books, sales, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales
  • children's books
  • adult fiction
  • educational books
  • million dollars
  • fluctuated
  • steady increase
  • peak
  • popularity
  • upward trend
  • interest
  • genre
  • recovery
  • comparative analysis
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