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The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram represents the
comparasion
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comparison
 of subjects which were chosen by male and female
students
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 in certain
university
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universities
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by
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 2005. In general, It can be clearly seen that the most popular selection by
male
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males
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 was
sciences
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while
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female
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females
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 was social
sciences
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.
In addition
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, the largest difference was
mathematices
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mathematics
. Male
students
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 tended to study
sciences
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such
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sciences
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and mathematices
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mathematices
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mathematics
, rather than arts or languages. First on the list was
sciences
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 at 23
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thousands
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thousand
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 people, twice higher than humanities. Followed by the
mathematices
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mathematics
, social
sciences
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 and
literatures
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literature
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, which were 18
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thousands
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thousand
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, 14
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thousands
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thousand
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 and 16
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thousands
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thousand
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 respectively.
Beside
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 that, the number of male
students
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 who chose the rest of
subjects
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the subjects
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were
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was
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on
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at
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 the bottom of the list, around 2 or 3
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thousands
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thousand
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 each
one
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apply
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.
In contrast
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, Social
sciences
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 ranked
the
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apply
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first place in female
students
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's selection, at nearly 25
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thousands
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thousand
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. More than 15
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thousands
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thousand
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chaos
chos
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choices

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, sciences, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart, illustrates, number of students, academic years
  • Trends, increased, decreased, remained stable
  • Popularity, more students, consistently, annually
  • Highest figure, lowest figure, peaked at, hit a low of
  • Reasons for trends, job market demand, curriculum changes
  • Summarize, key points, shifts in preferences, data overview
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