Dear Mr jay,
I hope you are doing well and here I want to invite you
a
get-together Change preposition
to a
party
Use synonyms
in
on Sunday evening which Change preposition
apply
organised
in my garden by me basically I completed my bachelor Add a missing verb
was organised
that is
why I invited you.
Linking Words
In
Change preposition
At
this
Linking Words
Use synonyms
party
I organised a dinner for refreshments and a singing competition with my friends Add a comma
party,
moreover
,will play some games.I arranged a Linking Words
bonefire
over there I hope you will enjoy at Correct your spelling
bonfire
this
time .
Linking Words
Furthermore
,I would do confess Linking Words
you
that I and my friends will Change preposition
to you
doing
all these activities Change the verb form
do
be doing
Linking Words
this
Correct word choice
so this
noice
disturb you.I will try to finish Correct your spelling
noise
this
quickly.
If you Linking Words
did
not mind you would like to join Wrong verb form
do
my
Change the pronoun
the
party
that I arranged.I will feel honoured if you join us.you came and enjoyed Use synonyms
my
meal that I put in Change the pronoun
the
this
Linking Words
party
and Use synonyms
also
joined the Linking Words
bonefire
late Correct your spelling
bonfire
night
.
Thank you for Change preposition
at night
being
your time.
Yours sincerely,
Rabia Rizwan.Verb problem
spending
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