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The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 - 34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 - 34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The provided table
compare
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compares
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 the
percentage
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 of people from 25 to 34 years old housing status in the
Uk
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UK
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 over a decade, between 2004
to
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and
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 2014. From 2004 to 2007,
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home owners
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homeowners
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 had the
highet
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highest
 proportion at
near
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 59% in 2007, it steadily reduced to 55% in 2014. In comparison, the
share
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 of
renters
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 stood at only 20% in 2004,
while
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 it increased to 25% over the next four years. Between 2007 and 2011, the proportion of
home
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oeners
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owners
openers
 fell significantly to 42% in 2011,
while
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 the
percentage
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 of
renters
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 continued
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 upward trend, reaching
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just above 40 %.The
share
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 of both
categiries
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categories
 remained constant by 2012. Over the next three years, the
percentage
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 of
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home owners
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homeowners
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 reduced to 35%, reaching the lowest amount,
while
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 the
share
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 of
renters
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 rose sharply to 58%, reaching the highest
percentage
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,
at the end
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 of
period
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the period
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. All in all,
although
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 the
share
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 of
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home owners
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homeowners
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 was three times higher than
who
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those who
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 lived in rented accommodations in 2004, the
percrnatge
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percentage
 of
renters
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 stood at the first place in 2014.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, home, share, renters with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • homeownership
  • renting
  • mortgage
  • down payment
  • property market
  • housing affordability
  • economic downturn
  • government incentives
  • interest rates
  • demographic shift
  • real estate
  • first-time buyers
  • market trends
  • property prices
  • financial stability
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