The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 - 34 are housed in the UK. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting on the features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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how British young people aged between 25 and 34 were housed from 2004 to 2014.
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, it can be seen that the
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of house renters was increasing,
while
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that of
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home owners
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homeowners
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was decreasing. To commence with, the
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of renters in 2004 was nearly 20%. The number slowly
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afterwards, despite showing almost no change between 2005 and 2006 and a slight decrease from 2011 to 2012. Until 2014, the
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of renters was almost 50%.
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to the figure a decade ago, the
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of people who rented a house showed a substantial increase of more than 25%.
On the other hand
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, the rate of people who owned a
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was decreasing.
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it slightly increased during 2006 and 2007, the data shows a continuous decrease in the
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of
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home owners
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homeowners
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. Comparing the data of 2004 and 2014, the
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of
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home owners
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homeowners
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dropped sharply by more than 20%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, home with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • homeownership
  • renting
  • mortgage
  • down payment
  • property market
  • housing affordability
  • economic downturn
  • government incentives
  • interest rates
  • demographic shift
  • real estate
  • first-time buyers
  • market trends
  • property prices
  • financial stability
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