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The map show the lay out of a university campus in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map displays the view of a University campus in 2010.
Overall
Linking Words
, there are
two
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side
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sides
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in
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of
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 College land if the sight from the road between
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two
Correct article usage
the two
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 student
accommodation's
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accommodation
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building
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buildings
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. The left
side
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 contains formal buildings and the right one
contain
Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
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 the same figure with leisure places. The
left
Correct word choice
apply
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Student accommodation
in
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on
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 the left
side
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 has six floors surrounded by trees. Next
that
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to that
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 building is University offices with brown colour.
The
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On the
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 other
side
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 on the right, there is
Lake
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a Lake
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 with blue water surrounded by
Lawn
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a Lawn
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 and seating area. The Shops area could easily reach from the Lake.
Subsequently
Linking Words
, people could move to
Restaurant
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the Restaurant
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 in front of the Shops passing one tree.
Teaching
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The teaching
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 block of Arts and Science contains
two
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 floors located behind the Shops. The other Student accommodation is occupied in the corner of the road. That figure contains four floors applied
two
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colour
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colours
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 for its
wall
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walls
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 compared to
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
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 buildings.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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