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Band 3

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans illustrate data about the airport now and after
development
Correct article usage
the development
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some
Change preposition
of some
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 parts next year.
Overall
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, it's clear that the builders will increase the number of departures and arrivals.
Also
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,
instead
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 of walkways, they
add
Wrong verb form
added
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 a sky train and expanded the number of gates. They change some places in the airport, and they get new features. Looking at the information in more detail, we can notice that in the after-development plan, they got new things like shops. In the park of security passport control, builders will add bag drop, but they will change some areas of cafes and check-in. In the part of passport control customs, now
this
Linking Words
 area is empty.
However
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, they want to add their cafe, ATM
as well as
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 car hire.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, they will expand and
get
Verb problem
apply
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alteration
of
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apply
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a
Correct article usage
apply
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walkway, and they will raise the number of gates from
8to
Correct your spelling
8 to
 18.
along with
Linking Words
 that, departures and arrivals will get more entrance.

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task achievement
Make sure to clearly state the main features from the plans at the beginning of your essay, providing a clear overview.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that you maintain logical flow by using linking words to connect thoughts, making it easier for the reader to follow your reasoning.
task achievement
Provide specific examples to illustrate your points further. For instance, mention what specific shops will be added or what types of cafes will be changed.
coherence and cohesion
You've made a good attempt at describing the changes planned for the airport, focusing on key aspects.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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