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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. she is planing to stay with you,but you cant accomodate her. write a letter to her.

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Dear Reeta, I hope
this
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 letter finds you in radiant
helth
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health
 and the best of spirits.I am glad that you are coming next week and want to stay at my home. I am writing
this
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 letter to
applogise
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apologise
apologize
 about
that
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I can't
accomodate
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accommodate
 you
due to
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 my grandfather's health issues. My grandfather
got
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had
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an
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a
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 heart attack and he
is
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was
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 admitted
in
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to
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 the hospital
from
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for
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a
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the
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 previous month. Doctors
has
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have
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 been treating him very well,but he is not recovering and getting week day by day.My family is passing in
critical
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a critical
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 time and everyone is worried about the health of my
granfather
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grandfather
. As you know,I have
deep
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a deep
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 connection with my grandfather,and It is
worst
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the worst
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 situation for me to handle all these things. I want to request you to postpone your trip. If you cannot postpone your trip, I already talked with one of my
friend
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friends
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 to
accomodate
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accommodate
to
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apply
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you at her home.
she
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She
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 is my close friend ,and
live
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lives
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 near
by
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our house. She
would
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will
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 show you some historical and renowned tourist places in our area.Please let me know about
as
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it as
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 soon as possible. I hope you
would
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will
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 understand my situation and,give
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a promt
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promt
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prompt
 response.
Your
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Yours
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 Faithfully Aman

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coherence and cohesion
The letter could benefit from a clearer structure, perhaps by including a paragraph break when transitioning between topics, such as your grandfather's health and the accommodation issue.
task response
There are a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes that could be corrected to enhance clarity, such as 'accommodate' instead of 'accomodate' and 'health' instead of 'helth'.
task achievement
The letter expresses genuine concern for your friend's situation and conveys emotions effectively, which is a positive aspect of the writing.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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