In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are ongoing discussions about being responsible
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travelling, meaning preserving the cultural and natural assets of the attractions. In my opinion,
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it is possible to be largely responsible, by no means could tourists achieve complete responsibility, meaning not
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cause any impact on the living space.
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with, a prosperous
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destination faced higher living costs unavoidably, leading to
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the local residents. It is a conceivable outcome of the growing demands based on economic theory, and
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, it could still affect locals' standard of living significantly as the side effects of the commercial profits it draws.
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, the quality of life might be deteriorated
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by the crowds as well, since the public and residential areas might be packed with people, resulting in noise pollution and a great deal of trash.
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, citizens in Venice and Barcelona have long been complaining to their governments about these major issues.
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, tourists might be viewed as a hindrance when it comes to environmental preservation since the visit itself would potentially compromise biological balance.
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, the living condition of coral reefs is easily jeopardized by an array of factors, including temperature, pollution and light. Provided there were excessive visitors snorkelling or diving in those areas, it runs a potential risk of damaging natural habitats even with careful preparation since the temperature might be affected. In conclusion, the culture and environment of
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popular travelling destinations tend to be damaged to some extent by excessive visits when analyzed on both social and biological levels.
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, I think it is impossible to expect tourists to be a hundred per cent responsible.

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Task Achievement
While you present a clear argument and your opinion is well stated, consider addressing counterarguments to strengthen your stance further.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay is structured well with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Ensure that your main points flow logically from one to the next.
Task Achievement
Include more specific examples or data to reinforce your points, especially in discussing the effects on local residents and the environment.
Task Achievement
Your introduction clearly sets the stage for your argument and presents your opinion succinctly.
Coherence and Cohesion
You used appropriate vocabulary and varied sentence structures, showing a good command of language.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Responsible tourism
  • Cultural preservation
  • Environmental conservation
  • Sustainable practices
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly travel
  • Local economy
  • Community engagement
  • Cultural sensitivity
  • Sustainability balance
  • Ethical travel
  • Tourist impact
  • Green certification
  • Conservation efforts
  • Cultural norms
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