You recently received an invitation to a dinner party at your friend's house. Write a letter to accept the invitation. In your letter: - explain why you are accepting the invitation - describe why you are looking forward to the dinner party - offer to bring a dish to share You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dearn

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Dear

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Jenna, I hope you are doing well. I have not seen you in a

while

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. Probably it was

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apply

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last

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month

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when we went outside for

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lunch together. I got your invitation for a dinner party at your place. I was overjoyed

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when I

recieved

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received

tour

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the tour

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invitation card.

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, I am happily accepting

this

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invitation. The prime

reseaon

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reason

to be there is to spend time with you. I have missed you every single day. Most importantly, I am looking forward to

see

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seeing

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your parents. They have been always so nice to me, and I

want

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want to

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eat

a food

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food

a portion of food

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, which is made by your mother. Undoubtedly, she is a great chef.

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, I am excited to see our childhood friends, as they are invited, too. But, I have one request for you. Recently, I have started taking baking classes, and I have learned to make delicious chees cakes.

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, I am planning to bring Blueberry flavoured chees-cake on that day. So please inform your mother not to cook anything for

a desserts

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desserts

a dessert

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, as I will bring it. Can't wait for our reunion. See you next week! Lots of love, Mihir.

mihu.maisuriyaWed Feb 26 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your ideas more clearly. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea to improve readability.

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Check for minor spelling errors and punctuation, for example, 'Dearn' should be 'Dear' and 'recieved' should be 'received'.

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In your letter, you could elaborate a little more on why you enjoy your friend's parents' cooking to add depth to your response.

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Your enthusiasm for the dinner party and the warm tone creates a positive atmosphere in the letter.

coherence and cohesion

Your offer to bring a dish and the mention of your baking classes adds a personal touch to the invitation.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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The Greeting

In recent years, the pressure on schools and university students has been increasing. And they are pushed to work hard at a very young age. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you thinnk the educational benefits of testing outway any disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?