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The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in differentareas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts illustrate the total amount of
oil
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 in some areas
,
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 and their annual
oil
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consumption
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. At first
glance
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it is clear that
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middle
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east
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Eastern
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 countries and
Canada
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has
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have
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 the most
oil
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 resources,
however
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,
USA
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the USA
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, Asia and Western
Europe
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 are the places with the highest
oil
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consumption
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rate
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rates
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. It is evident from the graph that
,
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the Middle
middle
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east
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East
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regions
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region
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 has more than half of the
world
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oil
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 resources because
of
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there are many remote locations and infinite deserts.
Canada
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has
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own
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 nearly 15 percent of
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overall
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the overall
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oil
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 in the globe.
Besides
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, Eastern
Europe
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, Central and South America together have almost
same
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the same
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 proportion of
oil
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 as
Canada
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. There is more
oil
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 in Africa alone than rest of the countries. Turning to
the
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oil
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consumption
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, Asia and
United
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the United
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 States are on the top list
due to
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 many
of
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large car industries
as well as
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 Western
Europe
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 countries
produce
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producing
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 most of the
expansive
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expensive
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 vehicles.
Middle
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 East, Eastern
Europe
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,
Central
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and Central
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 and South America
has
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have
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 almost
same
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the same
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 level of
oil
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consumption
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. Even though,
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Middle
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the Middle
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 East and
Canada
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has
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have
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 the highest
oil
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 resources they use only a
little
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small
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 portion of it.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, consumption, middle, canada, europe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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