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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.

The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.
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The table displays the information of
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full-time Indian college
students
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 studying in 6 different universities in
UK
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the UK
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 across two academic years, 2020/21 and 2021/22.
Overall
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, it can be clearly observed that the
number
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 of
students
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 from India experienced an upward trend in every
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.
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University
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 accounted for the lowest
percentage
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increase
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, Sheffield
University
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 had the highest
percentage
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increase
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 even if the
number
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 of
students
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 was fewer. In 2020,
at
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 3,505
peoples
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University
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has
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 the highest
number
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 of Indian
students
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 among all other colleges, followed by the
University
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 of Greenwich and
Conventry
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Coventry
University
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 at 2,455 and
at
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2,390, respectively. Coventry
University
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’s
student
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students
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 increased dramatically to 5,290 and has the highest changes, its
percentage
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increase
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 was roughly
trippled
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tripled
triple
 that of the
University
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 of Greenwich and doubled that of BPP
University
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 which was the lowest at 46.8. Though Sheffield
University
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begin
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 with the smallest
number
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 of Indian
student
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students
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 at 815 people in 2020, it accounted for the largest
percentage
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increase
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 at 187.7. In 2021, Anglia Ruskin
University
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students
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 increased from 2020
at
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 3,265
whereas
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 the
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university
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University
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 of Leicester has the fewest changes at 1,215 people.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, number, university, percentage, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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