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The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Umar

The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Umar
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The two maps below illustrate information about a Harbour in 2000 and
in
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nowadays.
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 the town noticeably modernized over the given period. The government
decide
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 to change the entrance from
road
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the
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 street to the main street,next to them during the time was built a new showers and toilets.Above throwing main street
also
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 was a car park,shower and toilets which
were
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remained unchanged.The exit to the
see
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sea
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 from Marina
only
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 for private yachts and fishing boats were in opposite places between each other and they moved to Marina personal yachts
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,fishing boats relocated near Marina yachts.
In
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 the
road side
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roadside
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,at the edge of the river,
was
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were
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 added cafes and shops.
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hand
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 life boats stay untouched. The castle was not usage eventually,totally demolished and constructed
to
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 the hotel
in addition
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, the hotel rules
was
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were
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 changed and
public
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the public
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 beach began to
available
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be available
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 only
for
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to
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 residents of
hotel
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the hotel
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.Nearby the north in 2000 was only
only
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one
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 section for
dock
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a dock
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nevertheless
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,citizens of
Harbour
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the Harbour
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 established another section for
dock
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the dock
a dock
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 ,thereby
added
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adding
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 a new ship.The public beach and passenger ferries stayed the same throughout the given period.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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