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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the volumes of
tea
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 and
coffee
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 imported by four specific areas in the world, in 2007, presented in
tonnes
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.
It is clear that
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 the amount of
tea
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 imported by these countries was more significant in general compared to
coffee
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.
Overall
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, the UK and the USA worked mostly with
tea
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,
whereas
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 in Canada, we can see a greater demand for
coffee
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. Focusing first on the most intensive trade of
tea
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, 16,000
tonnes
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 were delivered to the UK, which was almost 50% higher than the volumes imported in America. When it comes to
coffee
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, the corresponding figures there were 4,000 and 7,500
tonnes
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, respectively. As for the remaining regions, in 2007, the leader in
coffee
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 imported was Canada, with 8,000
tonnes
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 of the product brought from foreign countries, as opposed to only half as much
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tea
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 received
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 year. With respect to Germany, the amount of both products there was relatively at the same levels of nearly 6,000
tonnes
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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