Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less Sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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decades, people's eating habits have changed beyond recognition and in the majority of countries citizens tend to consume packaged foods that contain high

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of sugar.

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increasing the price of unhealthy manufactured products can reduce their sales rate, some other measures, like a well-rounded education to the public and stricter rules, are

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effective.

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, heavy reliance on food and drink that contain high

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of sugar

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causes chronic health issues

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as

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diabetes

and high blood pressure.

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, some individuals claim that the best way to resolve

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problem is to make sugary items more expensive.

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these products are still available and consumers can purchase them, higher prices deter the customers from choosing them.

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, it is obvious that there are

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other solutions that can be extremely effective to tackle

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, governments should hold some

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public awareness campaigns in order to enhance

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people's knowledge

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what they are consuming.

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,

manufacurers

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manufacturers

should be forced to incorporate a sign that indicates the amount of

suger

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sugar

in the package.

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, in 2016 the UK's government enforced a law that all

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packaged food must have a

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that illustrates all the ingredients, and surprisingly more than 60% of customers chose healthier options. In summary, over-utilization of sugary food and drink has created a wide range of health problems all around the world.

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making

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products more expensive can play a significant role in preventing people from buying them, it is not the only way and governments should provide free educational events

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enforcing new regulations.