You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter, offer to make a popular dish from your country describe what this dish is explain why it should be included in the event Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.  Begin your letter as follows: Dear Luis,

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Dear Luis, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to request you to include one very popular dish from my country in our annual students’ club party.

Firstly

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, I would like to prepare Dhokla and Khaman for the entire club to come and celebrate

this

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unique flavour of Indian

cusine

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cuisine

Additionally

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, I will

also

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prepare cilantro sauce with it as a dip. Basically,

this

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is a steamed food with the batter made out of chickpea and rice flour.

Besides

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this

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, Multiple different varieties can be made simply by adding different dips and vegetables to serve

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to a large group of individuals.

Moreover

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, not only

this

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dish is easy to cook and

test

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delicious, but it

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has several health benefits, essential vitamins,

nutritions

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nutrition

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, and protein.

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but not least, pupils will enjoy eating something new as well. Thank you for organizing

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amazing event to allow students to share their favourite

recipe

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recipes

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from their birth nation

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others. Warm regards, Ruchin Patel

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coherence and cohesion

You might consider structuring the letter more clearly by separating the description of the dish and its reasons for inclusion into distinct paragraphs.

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Make sure to check your spelling, such as 'cuisine' instead of 'cusine', which will improve the overall impression of your writing.

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Your enthusiasm for the event and your willingness to contribute is evident and commendable!

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The description of the dish is informative and gives a good insight into its preparation and benefits, which adds value to your suggestion.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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