The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given table compares data about how many cell phones that 5 various companies sold in millions from 2006 to 2012.
Overall
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, the numbers of models from Apple and Samsung have risen,
whereas
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, the numbers of Ericsson and Motorola have plummeted during
this
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period. Only Nokia has remained stable after six years. In 2006 , the model Samsung sold 117 million,
while
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Motorola sold approximately twice that much ,
however
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, in the next year , the amount of produced phones in the two companies equalised , and by 2012 , Samsung company was 13 times bigger than Motorola , with 396.5 and 28 million consumers , relatively. At the beginning of the period, Nokia Corporation was a world leader , but Apple did not even exist at that time. Both had an increase in customers from 2006 to 2008 ,
on the other hand
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, Ericsson had a fluctuation. From now until 2012 , Nokia and Ericsson moderately declined and hit their minimum of 335 and 28 , comparatively,
in contrast
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, Apple's stock surged and reached a maximum of 135.8 million.

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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • mobile phones sold
  • increase/decrease
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • stability
  • significant rise/drop
  • comparison
  • growth/decline
  • market saturation
  • technological advancements
  • consistent trend
  • notable change
  • peak sales year
  • lowest sales year
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