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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of
people
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 (in millions) moving from rural to urban areas in Iran, Indonesia, and Russia from the year 2000 to 2025.
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, Iran and Russia had the highest number of
people
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 moving to urban areas, as compared to Indonesia over the given years. In the year 2000, the Iranians steadily moved to urban areas till 2005 from 1
million
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 to 10
million
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people
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, after which it drastically increased to around 35
million
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 in 2010. Over the next decade, the numbers will increase to more than 90
million
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people
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 moving to metropolitan cities by 2025. The Russians had a uniform movement to modern cities until 2010 to around 40
million
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people
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. A spike in migration was seen in the next 5 years to 70
million
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people
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. In the next 10 years, a balanced increase was seen to around 85
million
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people
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 in 2025 which was lower as compared to Iran. Indonesia had a stable increase in the number of
people
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 moving out of the suburbs till 2020 to 30
million
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people
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,
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, the will numbers remain stagnant until 2025.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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