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The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
level
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 of
air
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pollution
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 caused by,
electricity
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 generation,
transport
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, and
industry
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 means, in four different countries in the year 2021.
Overall
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, China showed the highest
level
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 of
air
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pollution
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,
while
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 Australia has the least
air
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pollution
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 source, except for
electricity
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 generation.
Firstly
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, China's
air
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pollution
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 stood at the highest with
industry
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 causing 80
ppm
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level
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, followed by transportation, at about 70
ppm
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,
then
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electricity
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 generation at the bottom with approximately 69
ppm
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level
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 of Chinese
air
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pollution
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.
Similarly
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 to China, Japan is
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 polluted the most by
industry
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 at around 42
ppm
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, followed by
transport
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 at 30
ppm
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, with
electricity
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 source being the lowest at around 17
ppm
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. America
on the other hand
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, displayed a different trend from the above countries, with
transport
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 being the main method of
pollution
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 at just below 60
ppm
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, and the rest at about 30
ppm
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.
However
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, Australia's
air
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pollution
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 has been the lowest across all sections, with all means of
pollution
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 standing at just below 20
ppm
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, with
industry
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 and
transport
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 having equal levels.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words level, air, pollution, electricity, transport, industry, ppm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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