The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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graph compares the number of
Japanese
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who travelled abroad over a decade, from 1985 to 1995 and the second graph reveals the development of Australia's share of Japan's tourist industry over the same period. Looking at the data in more detail, the number of
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tourists began at just above 4
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in 1985.Between 1985 and 1990, the proportion of overseas
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increased steadily, reaching nearly 11
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in 1990, following which it experienced a partial reduction to 10
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in 1991.
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, it continued its upward trend and rose gradually, reaching a peak of 15
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, by 1995.
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the figures, the proportion of
Japanese
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who visited Australia increased from 2% in 1985 to just under 5% in 1988.
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it underwent a partial decline to 4% over the following year.
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it started its upward trend and reached a peak of 6%, from 1989 to 1995. All in all, the both number of
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tourists and the share of Australia from Japan's tourist industry developed steadily over the given period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • decade
  • fluctuation
  • consistent growth
  • market share
  • peak
  • period
  • significant
  • trend
  • indicate
  • tourism industry
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