In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

In some nations , university students reside

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their own place with their

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during

studies

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their studies

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and on the

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, in some countries people

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live far away from their

home

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for the purpose of their studies. yes, the

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advantages

of staying away from their own place outweigh the drawbacks.Moving out means taking responsibilities of your own in your hands and starting your own

life

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. There are a lot of advantages when you take everything under your control.At the same

time

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there are

shportcomings

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shortcomings

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which can be neglected at the cost of benefits. The people who

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no

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other

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leaving

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home

town

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hometown

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or place for the purpose of their

fiture

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future

,

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tend to have stronger vision and passion

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them

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compared to others. It means they need to gather a lot of courage to take

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one step which can turn their

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upside-down.

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for

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example

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am a person who took that courageous step for my own good and faced a lot of struggles.

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overcame it by learning many things like being independent,taking up my own responsibilities rather than taking help from my family,supporting myself,trying to cop with

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environment,

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language barriers,

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might sound silly but learning how to do my own chores and mainly learnt how to be emotionally and mentally stable at tough times

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of giving up. The

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are some of

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i

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did personally but the

life

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lesson

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got to learn in a most cruel way is that no matter how hard the situation is ,it too

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end at a point where you are about to give up.so just keep it in mind and move ahead by saying it to yourself that just take one more step and never loose hope. In conclusion, on

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of what

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faced

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suggest everyone

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experience attending studies from different areas than

your

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hometown

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face what

life

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brings on and never think less of

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.Believe in yourself,

u

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you

can do anything and everything.