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The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962. Beka

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962. Beka
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The maps below
illustrates
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 modifications that have taken
a
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place in these cities: Meadowside
village
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Village
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, Fonton and a neighbouring town, from 1962 to
present
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the present
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days
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day
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.
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, we may see significant changes geographically and residentially. There was considerable development of the settlement over these years and it was gradually transformed from
a
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two
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 small
villages
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 surrounded by water into a connected residential area.
Two
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villages
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 were connected with geographical changes. First of all from 1962 to 1985
two
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villages
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 were increased and related by a small road. In the Meadowside
village
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village,
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 many buildings were constructed and built
two
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 roads , one of which was like a bridge between
two
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 hamlets. Among the buildings that were built were
Leisure
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 complex, Housing estate and
Super-store
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Superstore
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.
Then
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 from 1985 to
present
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the present
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day
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days
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days,
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two
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villages
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 were related by using geographical changes. A lot of buildings were built. In the middle of
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two
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the two
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villages
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 were constructed
: Hotel
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a hotel
,
business
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a business
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 park and a station.
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Also
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 a railway was built
together with
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 the station , it goes east to Fonton village.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, villages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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