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Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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Recently, there are two groups of
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 up in different
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 in the morning or
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.I complety see get up in the early better than late. In
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 prefer
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 up in the morning and at
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 with the early morning, I believed that better
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 to compleating
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 is the early morning for many reasons. Fristly, some
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 prefer to doing some exercises ever day .
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: doing some sports or reading book with sunset.
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, most students prefer to studing in the first morning befor going to school.
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: there is studies from SQU for pupils who studing during morning
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 they gets a highest percentage around 95%.
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, adelts prefer to
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 up early to get vitamin D especially for individuals who have a lowest vitamins.
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, most youth the want get up in the afternoon because of the
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work
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. Fristly,
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 who have own business brefer to working at evening.
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 they doing
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 meeting or interview .
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, some
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 wants to
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 up in the afternoon like youth and doing their responsibilities at
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. For insteans: there is studies about
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People
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 that doing
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 in the evening 80% the can not compleating their jobs.
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, Som individuals. working as a part
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 and they prefer working at
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 shift. For examples: humans who working at hospital the feel more comfortable working
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. In conclusion,
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 up early is better for working, Studing, health and doing exercises.
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,
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 up late make
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 can not compliting their
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. In my opinon I prefer to get up early for my health.

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language error
Improve sentence structure and grammar to enhance clarity and readability. For example, phrases like 'to wak up in different time' should be corrected to 'to wake up at different times.'
content development
Elaborate on your ideas with more examples and specific details to strengthen your arguments. For instance, provide more recent research or studies that support your claims.
cohesion
Use transition words and phrases to better connect your ideas and paragraphs, which will improve the overall flow of the essay.
content understanding
You clearly stated your preference for waking up early and provided reasons for this choice, which is a good start in addressing the task.
example usage
You included examples to support your points, demonstrating an effort to relate your ideas to real-life situations.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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