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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar chart displays the size of the population in urban
areas
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 across 5 different continents and in the world as a total in 1950, 2015 and 2050. The distribution is shown in percentages.
Overall
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, the largest population to inhabit the citified
areas
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 of a continent in 1950 and 2015 reside in North America. The chart predicts the same pattern for the year 2050 as well.
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, the smallest number of individuals residing in the inner-city parts are in Africa. On another note,
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 the bar graph, the number of residents in these
areas
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 follows an upward trend over time. Looking at the details, in 1950, only 30 per
cent
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 of the world's population inhabited the cities and towns.
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, it increased by 20 per
cent
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 in 2015 and is expected to be triple that of its starting figure by 2050. The continent with the largest number of
its
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individuals living in metropolitan parts
is
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in
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 North America,
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 64% in 1950, approximately 80 per
cent
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 in 2015, and an expected 87 per
cent
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 in 2050.
On the other hand
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, the least metropolitan continent is Africa. In 1950, approximately only one in seven people lived in
townified
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terrified
areas
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, and by 2015, the size
has
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 grown by 22 per
cent
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. The graph foresees that by 2050, slightly over half of the Africans will be living in urban
areas
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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