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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 table illustrates the
number
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 of exchange
students
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 from universities in several European nations to Australia from 2007 to 2009.
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, it's clear from the data that
Germans
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 had the biggest
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 of
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exchange
students
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 out of the rest of the nations, with a great jump in two years.
France
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 comes after that with a slightly different
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. With regards to the
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student
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students
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exchanging
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 to Europe, the top and least countries on the list
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France
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, and the
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Netherlands
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 respectively. In detail, the
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 of 2007
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 and Swedish
students
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 was only 27, and 34 in a matter of two years, the
number
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 had increased to reach 62 and 42 in 2009 respectively.
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France
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 and the Netherlands' numbers stayed very stable throughout the period.
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, the Australian
students
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 top the nation by data,
France
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 with 58 after 37 in 2007. The
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 country on the table was given to the Netherlands

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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