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Students should be taught to read and write using a computer, as handwriting will not be used in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There are debates over how students should learn to read and write. Some
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 believe that they should be taught
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 computers as
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 is the trend nowadays. Others believe that handwriting should be kept as
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 is the traditional
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 of learning. In
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 essay, I will discuss both views and present my own opinion. There is no doubt that
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 conducted by the majority. There are a few advantages, one is efficiency. Typing is usually faster than handwriting and is more accurate because there is
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an auto
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 spelling check function installed in the
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 and
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 would not be confused by the words of handwriting.
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, with the use of
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,
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 can send their writing to others in seconds, rather than sending a piece of handwriting by post which could take at least a couple
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. Another advantage is more
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 friendly as reading and writing on a
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 do not require the use of pen and paper.
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 writing and reading on a
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 is the main
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people
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 use
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.
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, though handwriting is
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 and could be using
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 and ink, I agree that children should be taught handwriting.
First,
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handwriting is a good practice for children to learn fine motor skills, how to control the pen and their strength in writing words.
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cards and letters that are written by hand
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 more meaningful and touching than a piece of typed writing.
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, calligraphy is not only a piece of art
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 worth preserving, but it is
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 a hobby and a
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 of meditation.
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, it requires
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 mind and focus in practicing calligraphy which makes
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 relaxed.
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, reading and writing using computers is the main
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 of life in the modern world because it is efficient and accurate.
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, I believe that handwriting is worth preserving as it brings out emotions from reading and writing handwritten words.

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In the introduction, ensure that your thesis statement clearly reflects your stance on the issue. You mention both views, but be more explicit about your position.
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In Body Paragraph 1, you could add a real-life example or statistic to support your claims about the efficiency of computer-based writing.
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Make sure to use linking words throughout the essay to improve the flow of your arguments, enhancing coherence.
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In your conclusion, summarize your key points more clearly, reinforcing your overall position.
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The essay presents a balanced view of both arguments, which demonstrates a good understanding of the topic.
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The discussion of handwriting as a practice for fine motor skills and an art form shows depth in your reasoning.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital literacy
  • Cognitive development
  • Historical tradition
  • Communication methods
  • Digital technology
  • Memory retention
  • Learning comprehension
  • Environmental benefits
  • Digital divide
  • Inaccessible
  • Personal expression
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