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Band 6

The line graph illustrates the top three UK electricity source from 2009 until 2019

The line graph illustrates the top three UK electricity source from 2009 until 2019
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The line graph illustrates the top three UK power supplies from 2009 until 2019.
To begin
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, natural gas was the most favored with 45% in 2009, started
decline
Wrong verb form
declining
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 significantly
and
Correct word choice
apply
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hit the bottom in 2013, and
then
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 grew steadily. Coal started at 3%
began
Correct word choice
and began
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 to rise gradually and notably
decline
Wrong verb form
declined
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with
Change preposition
to
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 below 5%
at
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in
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 2019. Nuclear was the unpopular one, commenced at 2% and the trend remained steady only slightly
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreasing
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 at 15% in 2019.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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