IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6

The line graph illustrates the top three UK electricity source from 2009 until 2019

The line graph illustrates the top three UK electricity source from 2009 until 2019
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The line graph illustrates the top three UK power supplies from 2009 until 2019.
To begin
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, natural gas was the most favored with 45% in 2009, started
decline
Wrong verb form
declining

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb decline. Consider changing it.

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 significantly
and
Correct word choice
apply

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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hit the bottom in 2013, and
then
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 grew steadily. Coal started at 3%
began
Correct word choice
and began

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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 to rise gradually and notably
decline
Wrong verb form
declined

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb decline. Consider changing it.

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with
Change preposition
to

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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 below 5%
at
Change preposition
in

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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 2019. Nuclear was the unpopular one, commenced at 2% and the trend remained steady only slightly
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreasing

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb decrease. Consider changing it.

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 at 15% in 2019.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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