Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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As all we know,

humans

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have been contaminating the

planet

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for years and now climate change

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creating several

problems

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in our ecosystem. Probably, in a few decades,

humans

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will go to travel into

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space searching for a new

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as our home. Some

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think

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but, others,

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believe

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is a new problem. The next paragraphs of

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examples because

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a future with

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could

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take us to other planets it sounds great but

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the

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about

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is our overpopulation, even, if

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they will need to select what

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are going to

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mentioned,

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is a new problem because leaders or

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governments

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kind of

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decision

and poor

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the

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earth.

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had

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had a large number of

nature

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problems

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as earthquakes or tsunamis and the

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most affected

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poor

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could be a good option but we cannot select

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who will live or

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maybe

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contamination. If we leave the earth, society

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going to need to make

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in our way to care about a new

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, if we do not do it, we will kill another ecosystem.

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, in the old world, Spanish

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traveled to the Americas but they brought with them

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of their civilitation as diseases and gold ambition.

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reason,

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need to

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make changes

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the

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and learn about the importance of care

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planets and space. In conclusion, the human species

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to make changes in our own environment first and

scientifics

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scientists

will develop technology to help nature and avoid contamination,

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humans

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are going to

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bad decisions.

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Task Achievement

Enhance your introduction by clearly stating your position on the topic. Be explicit about to what extent you agree or disagree with the opinion presented.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph starts with a clear topic sentence that summarizes the main idea of that paragraph. This will help in maintaining a logical structure.

Coherence and Cohesion

Revise for clarity and grammatical accuracy. A few grammatical errors (e.g., 'belive' should be 'believe') can distract from your message. Proofreading can help minimize these errors.

Task Achievement

Your essay addresses the prompt, presents differing viewpoints, and attempts to back up arguments with examples, which is commendable.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

388 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental degradation
sustainable development
renewable energy
carbon footprint
biodiversity loss
climate change
greenhouse gases
deforestation
pollution
habitable planets
space colonization
terraforming
ethical dilemmas
resource allocation
technological advancements

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