the diagram shows the process of making coffe

The diagram illustrates the stages involved in

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coffee production which consists of 11 distinct stages.

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, it is evident that the process commences with manual

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and later machinery for most of the steps.

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, coffee beans are hand-picked from trees by local farmers and left to dry under natural sunlight,

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is followed by roasting them in a machine.

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, the temperature is dropped and the roasted beans are cooled quickly using a freezer. After cooling, they are ground by hand until they become a fine powder.

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, workers combined them with hot water and stirred, and after a

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, the mixture

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strained. The next four phases of

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process are freezing the previous mixture,followed by grinding them.

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, they put it into

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the vacuum

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dry them and to make sure that there is no water left.

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, the coffee granules are packed into jars ,making them ready for distribution and sale.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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