some people believe that supermarkets and manufacturers should take an account to reduce the packaging of
they sell, others think that consumers have to avoid purchasing
with a lot of packaging.
essay will discuss both views and explain why I think both
,
, and sellers should be responsible for reducing too
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containers.
On the
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hand, many people think that a duty to reduce packaging belongs to retailers and
because they can contribute to a higher rate of reduction, addressing the current
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issues. Changing some parts of their packages, not only their design but
materials used, leads to a
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decrease in non-environmental friendly materials used.
, in the past, Japanese manufacturers chose to cover their
with 3 layers of plastic boxes.
their design was so fantastic and
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their prices, they produced a lot of
that
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the environment terribly.
, it is thought that consumers play an important role in decreasing packaging produced since their voices
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matter and that can
' behaviour. To survive in
competitive era, sellers must listen to their
. If buyers avoid or ban the
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with
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huge useless packaging, the sales of those
will drop.
, the owners must stop producing too
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packaging in order to meet their
' expectations, eventually resulting in a larger number of
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packaging's reduction.
To reduce the packaging effectively,
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is the
of all
regardless of their positions.
and sellers can
the way they pack their
, consumers can
their behaviours to consume
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with a lot of packaging.
, the government is
another player who has a duty to foster the reduction. By imposing a strict policy
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packaging manufactured,
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taxes, the number of packaging will decline significantly.
In conclusion, it is a duty for everyone to
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in reducing packaging.
supermarkets and manufacturers should
their design and materials used
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the
,
should
buyingChange the verb form
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with less packaging to influent the
.
, the government should impose a policy and increase taxes to reduce the production of any packaging effectively.