You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter •explain why you want to reduce your working hours •say which hours you would like to work •describe how your part-time studies would benefit your employer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am currently working as a full-time employee in your company but from next month I would like to reduce my hours of
work
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, the reason behind
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is I am joining one part-time study
course
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. I just joined a Management and
Finance
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course
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through an online educational institute, so from next month
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want to reduce my days of
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and hours so I can focus on my study,
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will get
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score
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and
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will improve my knowledge of management and
finance
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. I would like to reduce my Monday to Thursday availability and Will continue to
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on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday
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because
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do not have my classes on weekends so
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can do
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easily without any pressure
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on my other days
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can
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study properly. I am
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thinking that if
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complete
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course
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with enough knowledge of management and
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, our company
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will get some benefit from that because
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am only doing computer-based
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as
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accountant with you but after
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will able
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finance
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also
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and
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am sure
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will get proper education through
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course
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about
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. I hope you will consider my request to reduce my hours and you will give me
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as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully.

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general
Make sure to proofread for grammatical errors and typos (e.g., 'aslo' should be 'also').
coherence and cohesion
Try to improve the logical flow by ensuring each paragraph has a clear focus. For example, separate your reasons for reducing hours and the benefits to the employer into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
Use a more formal tone in your request, especially in the closing. Instead of 'you will give me answer', consider saying 'I look forward to your response'.
task achievement
You clearly stated your intention to reduce working hours and the reason for this decision, which is important for task achievement.
task achievement
You explained how your studies would be beneficial to the company, showing an understanding of mutual benefit.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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