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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbours, ........

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Dear Neighbours, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you about the recent problems that we all
sharing
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 in our
area
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. As you know, recently we all have noticed that the parking
area
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became
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has become
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 extremely packed,
alot
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a lot
 of new
vistors'
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visitors'
 cars that we do not usually see is coming in huge numbers
in
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into
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 the parking
area
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, and as you know the zone is not as big as we want it to be. Me and
alot
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a lot
 of the neighbours
,
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 were forced to park our cars in a very long
area
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due to
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 the
vistors
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visitors
 taking our spots.
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, the new guests are very loud at night and making us
struglle
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struggle
 sleeping which
affect
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 our moods and jobs in a
negitave
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negative
 way. I believe that the only two possible ways to solve these problems are to tell the guests kindly to not park at our parking spot,
plus
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and
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 to inform them to stay as
quite
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quiet
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 as possible
while
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 staying. We can arrange a possible meeting
on
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apply
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the next
monday
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Monday
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 at 10:00 AM and find solutions. Best Regards, Saad Hdb

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task achievement
Try to specify what parking spots are being compromised and mention if this applies to all or just certain times.
coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking the text into more paragraphs to enhance readability. For example, a separate paragraph for the introduction, problems, suggestions, and conclusion would be clearer.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure correct spelling, such as 'a lot' instead of 'alot', and 'visitors' instead of 'vistors' and 'negative' instead of 'negitave'.
task achievement
You provided a clear description of the problems faced by all neighbors, which is important for task achievement.
task achievement
The suggestion for a meeting shows a proactive approach to resolving the issues, which is admirable.
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